Score: 9

"wow"

submission: Retarded Animal Babies 15

date: April 14, 2006

To be honest I don't really watch retarded animal babies and after watching that i know i'm missing something. That was really funny and extremely well done, keep up the good work.

Score: 9

"i can see where some of the bad reviews come from"

submission: My Tear for London

date: July 11, 2005

Althought I like it, i can see why some ppl dont.

i find it easy to respect and find the beauty of this, but some of the audience is a bit more immature and find a craving for more action in a tribute. This sounds ridiculous but it CAN be incorporated into something like this.

Where you ended the film, aggravated me to no end, some suggestions for an extension could have been:

1.) Continue the song, only used about half of it, and say a little something else about struggle and staying together through a hardship. Then as it says replay still play the song and fade it to the end. So just a little something at the end can help immensly.

2.) As the boy fades (still continue the song, Bright eyes-Fell in a Rabbit Hole, good song, good choice;D) show a man going to work, kissing his wife, hugging his kids, expecting a wonderful day. He would see children laughing and as he continues maybe darker less happy things. He would reach the subway and look at his watch, it would then turn to whatever time it was when the bombing occured. Then end. Hope you found those good ideas. Could show the bomb going off or could choose not to. I think it would be more powerful not to.

Going down the list:

Graphics: People think these are bad graphics..??...anyway sketchy works for me, and the black vs white clash, it seemed more solemn. The fire, i couldnt have thought of that idea, as it blasted with each word, good work.

Style: Hmmmm, although i liked it i was hesistant to give you evem a 7. Like i said people found it dull, but it was obviously supposed to be quiet and slow as if it were a moment of silence, correct? It was presented well however.

Sound: Id never heard of bright eyes and i searched the whole internet trying to find Fell in a rabbit hole....had no luck>=0

A great tribute, one of the best ive viewed

Good luck on future submissions im whole-heartedly looking forward to them

Score: 10

"so random...stupid....pointless...yet OMG SO GOOD"

submission: The Breakdancing Worm

date: July 6, 2005

..i dont give out tens unless i find the flash suitable...i rolled on the floor and laughed to show my praise of this movie..

a breakdancing worm... WHO BUT YOU MY GOOD MAN WOULD THINK OF THAT...you genius you...

the limits are endless for you, so well animated, flawless sound,style...as i said...a breakdancing worm, and you made ME laugh...he just sorta died =D

So going down the list:

Graphics: Extrememly well animated, i mean, you made a worm breakdance. Great movement, extremely smooth, coordination with ALL parts of the worms body and surrounding objects (ie; the sunglasses....him burrowing...). I have nothing bad to say about you drawings, which is a little dissapointing;D

Style: I've said it again and again...YOU MADE A FRIGGIN WORM BREAKDANCE, still speechless. I havent seen this from the likes of newgrounds yet and probly never will again.

Sound: Good choice of music, fit very well. Good sound volume too, didnt take away from the flash.

Humor: So random....exactly what i needed at 11:34 at night. Thank you for blessing me with such an animation.

So basically im saying, you deserve a better score than what, 2.0219...try 5.0000...=P
Maybe about alow to mid three range though.

Keep making flash like this, you'll get recognized

Good luck on future submissions, lookin forward to them

Score: 7

"you can make flash my friend..."

submission: Lilium-Dance of Lies pt.1

date: July 6, 2005

its not enough to make flash and be a good animator, one should be able to make a story that everyone wants to follow.

You also put the viewers in a mood in which they felt what the characters felt (i think the sound contributed), which is a gift.

The story was decent, like i said u made something almost everyone will follow along with, and it showed effort. I can see you didnt just whip this up, but used some time and passion to make this flash possible

Im going to go down the list:

1.)Graphics: Not much to say besides, great job. Youve done three flash pieces and you have a drawing ability that i personally would rank highly on my list. It ran smoothly, no problems, and the objects were placed well. Hats off for the boarders you used, brilliant, i would say. That gave it a touch that seemed to make it seem more story=like, combined with the music.

2.)Style: An original plot-line, thats for sure. As mentioned before in this review, the boarder was a style i havent seen before but made the flash that much better. At the same time i thought the movie moved a little slowly, unless you were going for that to keep viewers guessing and watching....then in that case you accomplished what you set out to do.

3.)Sound: The opra type music....not my favorite....however it fit perfectly with the piece. You transited the subtittles well so all reading levels can read without having to restart the movie, but they werent camping a tent on the screen and stayin there for ten minutes. The spanish wording, i thought, made the flash seem more professional. Good job in all the areas.

You sir, are a rising flash artist.

Good luck on future submissions.

Score: 7

"very surreal, original, keep practicing"

submission: Letter to God

date: July 5, 2005

no it doesnt send a messege i love but this was a decent flash
especially seeing is this is ur first flash, your a promising upcomming artist

this flash showed not only effort, but passion and i can see you spent some time on this piece

Graphics- The sketchy moving lines, great touch, loved it. It wasnt stick, and you could tell what was a human, what was a bee, a building, etc. Your flash skill will improve over time and youll evolve to even tougher designs, which will run smoothly.

Style- Your style is one that reminded me of salad fingers, with more plot of course. U sent a messege and made us feel pain that your characters felt. It kept you watching since this was so random and unpredictable.

Sound- A little choppy, however, was clear and suited the character.

I didnt penalize you for the other subjects, you didnt seem to be aiming for them

keep up the good work

-An Irishman

Score: 3

"veryyy good potential"

submission: Z0L0FT

date: May 30, 2005

anything besides the circle that u animated, was well animated

the idea however is what killed me...you could very well be the next great flash artist if u keep workin on ur flash, but the ideas must be better

Score: 7

"entertaining"

submission: Meow Meow... 1?

date: May 27, 2005

cute kittens with swords=D, original

graphics(especially in the loading screen) were VERY well done and smooth, fighting went well and was at perfect speeds

the style was good...like i said its kitty's wit swords whats not to like, and the sound....i did give u a good score on (mostly for the loading screen) but...i think u shouldbe added sound to the characters, im a lazy kid and the dialogue bubbles are hard to read=(

man oh man did i need to see a good fight scene like that...violence was as good as it gets and i think u should stick to flash like this, everyone will love it

-crazy irishman

Score: 6

"it was a good idea"

submission: babyrescue

date: May 27, 2005

i thought it was a bit difficult, the speed of the babies decent and the rescuers' movement, maybe their speeds could be an option on the main menu

graphics, were different, in a GOOD way though, i enjoyed seeing something new..although it was a bit squared off...violence i didnt think u were aiming for but the babies deaths' were well done i spose

lastly, yes it was a good idea but...i think it couldve been done a bit better, take ur time and make good flash

this is a good step from the "dress up jessica" game i saw in ur other submissions panel
KEEP IT UP

Score: 8

"great flash"

submission: story of a loser

date: May 26, 2005

one of my favorite pieces of flash you had an idea of the messege you promoted.

Graphics- Obviously well animated, life like, smooth

Style- Good, a typical story trying to give a messege but more interesting

Sound- 99 red ballons= instant ten

Violence- Not really any violence

Interactivity- Very well presented; like you made in the flash, you always seem to see that ONE person in the hall, and every one else is the same.

anyway, u got urself a fan...and for anyone that thinks theyre cool cause they "dont give a sh*t" and are "rebels" the ones that go and read books at lunch and do what they want are the ones that really dont care what people think...i respect that more than anyone walking around showing off their new tatoo that their mommy and daddy said not to get

anyway good flash make more plz

Score: 8

"easily rivals the great numa numa dance itself"

submission: Metal Slug VS Numa Numa

date: May 23, 2005

could of had a better ending tho, the battles were good aside from that great plot;D

keep the good work up